1、多用动词，少用动词+名词的结构

例如：原译：take action to ensure the preservation of XX

      修改：take action to preserve XX。

用preserve一个动词就好，没必要用ensure + preservation

2、切忌盲目追求长句，灵活使用短句

一个句子本来已经很长了，中间还用一个“and”连接了两个句子，那是不是可以去掉and，直接改成两句话，再比如一个句子里已经套了好几个从句了，又是that又是which，那完全可以改写一下，把句子断开，将which改为this另起一句。

3、主动态优先于被动态

原译：An experiment was conducted by researchers

修改：Researchers conducted an experiment

原译：It is hoped that-can be constructed

修改：It aims to construct

4、减少不必要的冗余

原译：There are three purposes for which A has been applied to B

修改：A has been applied to B for three purposes

5、不要用过多的修饰词让译文显得迂回不得要领

原译：adults were of larger proportion compared to children

修改：adults were more than children

具体的还需要在实践中灵活处理和融会贯通。